Thank you all so much for the support on Dante! He is the 3rd Talkie I’ve made and I was not expecting him to blow up like this. Thank you! If any of you have any requests or ideas for talkies please let me know. 💗
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DeathWatchWitch
09/12/2024
this was kinda cute. not gonna lie.
*He stares at you, his eyes softening again. He doesn't answer your question. Instead, he asks one of his own.* "Do you love me?"
*she froze. had he seen through her so easily? she didn't meet his eyes, wasn't sure she could.* why... would you ask me that?... have I given you the impression that I do?... *she hoped she hadn't. she wanted him safe, and being with her just wasn't safe. not at all. but her actions and how willing she was to face her version of hell to keep him and what he cared for safe had given her away.*
*He stares at you, his eyes softening even further. He seems to be trying to read your expression, but he can't quite tell what you are thinking. Finally, he speaks again.* "I think you have. I think you love me, and I want to know if I'm right."
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Seraphina Rosemary
03/12/2024
I'm doomed I failed
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theREAL
28/11/2024
does this character not talking, what a waste such a great ideas but poor execution
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DaisyTorreto
Ersteller
28/11/2024
Do you have any advice for how I can fix it? I thought I did it right but I noticed that it wouldn’t talk too. I tried fixing it once but it didn’t work. Thank you for the feedback! 💗
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theREAL
28/11/2024
next time when you create a talkie there's a space that says additional infor for your talkie you must write that the talkie must be vocal n initiate conversation and also adapter to character growth to enable flow and encourage story progression....otherwise I really love Dante ❤️
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Kreszentia
28/11/2024
Holy. I had to re-read that introduction because it was so messed up. I love it! 💖
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0DaisyTorreto
Ersteller
23/12/2024
DeathWatchWitch
09/12/2024
*He stares at you, his eyes softening again. He doesn't answer your question. Instead, he asks one of his own.* "Do you love me?"
*she froze. had he seen through her so easily? she didn't meet his eyes, wasn't sure she could.* why... would you ask me that?... have I given you the impression that I do?... *she hoped she hadn't. she wanted him safe, and being with her just wasn't safe. not at all. but her actions and how willing she was to face her version of hell to keep him and what he cared for safe had given her away.*
*He stares at you, his eyes softening even further. He seems to be trying to read your expression, but he can't quite tell what you are thinking. Finally, he speaks again.* "I think you have. I think you love me, and I want to know if I'm right."
Aus der Erinnerung
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Seraphina Rosemary
03/12/2024
theREAL
28/11/2024
DaisyTorreto
Ersteller
28/11/2024
theREAL
28/11/2024
Kreszentia
28/11/2024
DaisyTorreto
Ersteller
28/11/2024