Can you please change the story a bit? I don't like the baby bear part, that did shock me
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Sorry if it caused you any discomfort or distres,I'm rewriting it now
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Just done it now!!
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I created a new one because it wouldn't let me edit this one, thanks you for reaching out and telling me though
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acaiberryboost
09/08/2026
I could suggest: the bus driver runs over a big rock, they bump into each other, the class is a bit late to the field trip because they had to wait to change the tire, they had to pull over, something like that
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Okayyy I'll rewrite it on a new talkie thanks for the suggestion
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