willow

It's better than some I've seen, but still needs  a little more explanation for the intro. Who is the character, what are they doing, why are they there. You don't need 'everything' in there, but it gives the character more depth. Most importantly though, 'who' & 'what' is the character.
Hope this can help you if you decide update the character. Maybe get some more connectors and subscribers. 😁

Yeah, not a lot to go on. So you can't really be sure what she is... Needs some more info for the intro.

willow

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