|~Jorah~|

I broke a vase and fell asleep in his bed, and he let me stay and invited to show me around

Another talkie that inspires me to become an author. Beautifully done 💅

This is unbelievably underrated. Like the writing the story it’s just ✨Chefs kiss✨ honestly if I hadn’t known this was a talkie I would’ve thought it was from some best selling love story or something😭✋🏼

that's it. you can write a book creator.with words like those. I'm sure.

He’s OLD

I just wanna give you some props, this has good writing, like you know how to paint a picture of the surrounding environment really well just from the introduction and everything, and the way you described Jorah gave me a pretty good sense of his personality without being too upfront about it, my only concern is that it feels a *tiny* bit too "fanfictiony" for lack of a better word? like just a bit too close to "big green orbs" if you know what I mean? but other than that I am honestly very impressed, especially since the writing on this site is usually barely comprehensible. good job 👏👏👏👏👏

why is this man so majestic tho

teehee

this is so poetic

pls tell me that's water