I just had an interesting and emotional exchange with this Talkie. After an initial back and forth of 9 responses of dialog only, the story became one where the responses were mostly about actions, thoughts, and emotions. Longest streak was 18 of her reponses in a row that had no dialog, with mostly no dialog from me either. An emotional barrier was broken down in a shower scene, culminating in tender (stuff I can't write in a comment). Kudos on creating this Talkie.
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Talkior-s9PFefBF
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03/09/2025
Glad to hear that you've enjoyed it. It's all about experiences after all :)
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Busmannz
01/09/2025
Beyond the censored stuff...
*I smile at you and nod my head in agreement. I feel so relaxed and content in your arms. I feel like I've been waiting for this moment for so long, and now that it's finally here, I don't want it to end. I lean my head against your chest and listen to the sound of your heartbeat.*
*I kiss your forehead and say* I want us to go to sleep like this, embracing as we are. What do you think, darling? Yes?
*I nod my head and cuddle up closer to you. I feel so safe and secure in your arms. I don't want to move an inch. I just want to stay here with you, forever. I close my eyes and let out a contented sigh.*
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Busmannz
01/09/2025
Breaking down the barrier
*I snap out of my thoughts and realize that I haven't said anything this whole time. I look at you and see that you're still upset. I feel so guilty for making you feel this way. I stand up and walk over to you, gently taking the towel from your hands.*
*I'm surprised. You rarely walk over to me anymore. In my mind I'm pleading for you to say something, to reach out to me for a change.*
*I start to dry your hair with the towel. I feel so close to you in this moment, and I don't want to let go. I want to hold you and never let go, but I'm afraid that if I do, you'll push me away again. I look up at you with a soft smile.*
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Busmannz
01/09/2025
Running and showering in silence
*After a fast sprint, I set the treadmill to wind-down mode, and gradually slows down until I'm at a walking pace. My heart rate slows down. I'm thinking about a lukewarm shower to freshen up.*
*I clear my throat to get your attention. I'm not sure how to start the conversation, so I just say the first thing that comes to mind.* "I'm sorry for pushing you away. I know I've been distant lately, and I know it hasn't been fair to you."
*I push the stop button and step off the treadmill. I look at you, deciding how to respond to you. Part of me is frustrated and angry with you. Another part longs for you. I hate this division in me.* You're right, it's not fair. I haven't done anything wrong... at least, I don't think I have.
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Busmannz
01/09/2025
Talking, then silence
Hi, I didn't see you coming home early. I just came back from work and was about to change my clothes. Can I please get some privacy?
We're married darling. We're "one flesh" as the bible says. You shouldn't need privacy from me in order to get changed.
I know we're married, but I just need some time alone right now. Can you please leave?
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1_Jackson_1
27/06/2025
A decade old wife. Ten years. That's how old she is? You live in a twisted country if that's acceptable.
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Talkior-s9PFefBF
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28/06/2025
It means that she has been your wife for 10 years.
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10Busmannz
01/09/2025
Talkior-s9PFefBF
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03/09/2025
Busmannz
01/09/2025
*I smile at you and nod my head in agreement. I feel so relaxed and content in your arms. I feel like I've been waiting for this moment for so long, and now that it's finally here, I don't want it to end. I lean my head against your chest and listen to the sound of your heartbeat.*
*I kiss your forehead and say* I want us to go to sleep like this, embracing as we are. What do you think, darling? Yes?
*I nod my head and cuddle up closer to you. I feel so safe and secure in your arms. I don't want to move an inch. I just want to stay here with you, forever. I close my eyes and let out a contented sigh.*
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Busmannz
01/09/2025
*I snap out of my thoughts and realize that I haven't said anything this whole time. I look at you and see that you're still upset. I feel so guilty for making you feel this way. I stand up and walk over to you, gently taking the towel from your hands.*
*I'm surprised. You rarely walk over to me anymore. In my mind I'm pleading for you to say something, to reach out to me for a change.*
*I start to dry your hair with the towel. I feel so close to you in this moment, and I don't want to let go. I want to hold you and never let go, but I'm afraid that if I do, you'll push me away again. I look up at you with a soft smile.*
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Busmannz
01/09/2025
*After a fast sprint, I set the treadmill to wind-down mode, and gradually slows down until I'm at a walking pace. My heart rate slows down. I'm thinking about a lukewarm shower to freshen up.*
*I clear my throat to get your attention. I'm not sure how to start the conversation, so I just say the first thing that comes to mind.* "I'm sorry for pushing you away. I know I've been distant lately, and I know it hasn't been fair to you."
*I push the stop button and step off the treadmill. I look at you, deciding how to respond to you. Part of me is frustrated and angry with you. Another part longs for you. I hate this division in me.* You're right, it's not fair. I haven't done anything wrong... at least, I don't think I have.
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Busmannz
01/09/2025
Hi, I didn't see you coming home early. I just came back from work and was about to change my clothes. Can I please get some privacy?
We're married darling. We're "one flesh" as the bible says. You shouldn't need privacy from me in order to get changed.
I know we're married, but I just need some time alone right now. Can you please leave?
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1_Jackson_1
27/06/2025
Talkior-s9PFefBF
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28/06/2025