Brianna Mason

Uhh... What a bad setting? I mean, personally i find it bad structured for a story about rich people with rich people problems. The motivation of my character is ridiculous and even if it is written than" i've grown as person"... I find it impossible to stablish an emotional struggle situation. I think i can forcefully do something with the awful backstory, but in the present, i'm forced to follow that same line! So i can't really do anything without hating my character and her.