It’s taking me awhile to do a talkie of any value..
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Ulana
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17/08/2024
Charly's Playlist
* Black To the Future - Def Jef
* Dirty Gold - Angel Haze
* Cold War - Janelle Monáe
* The Dreaming Room- Laura Mvula
* Think - EP - Kaleida
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Nigel Banner
29/07/2024
No, not Charly Marlowe. ‘I have seen the devil of violence and the devil of greed, and the devil of hot desire,’ but she is no devil, Kurtz is!
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Ulana
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29/07/2024
That passage raises the "hair under my cap" (I think that's how original Marlowe would say it) But, Right! Charly's all good. Kurtz, in my telling and HoD, has succumbed to his worst tendencies. I love so many passages in HoD; I'm experimenting with another talkie to see what can be done with the Create Stories feature (creaing optional goals to be fulfilled). Then apply what I learn, maybe, to this talkie.
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Nigel Banner
30/07/2024
I look forward to your experimentation! I’m actually doing something with little red riding hood. I’m trying to appropriate Angela Carter’s short story ‘Company of Wolves’. I’ll have to see what transpires. I just don’t have faith in the majority of the users here!
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Nigel Banner
28/07/2024
just stepped into the narrative - the horror the
Imagine the Romans arriving here long ago—the very end of the world, a murky sea, a sky the color of lead, going up this river. Sandbanks, marshes, forests. Precious little to eat fit for a civilized person. Here and there a military camp lost in a wilderness. Cold, fog, tempests, disease, exile, and death. They must have been dying like flies here! ~ Stay alert, Mate. We have many hundreds miles to travel yet. Weigh ancrhor at night, steer clear of snags by day!
*looking out into the border that lines both sides of the serpentine river, I shudder at the silence that pervades everything. Long ago, a wise one told me - beware the silence, its secrets are full of the horror, the horror. Those words now haunt me as I watch you, Your cold gaze surveying the distance*
There is a saying among seamen: "In every port, you can find a past, and in every port, a future." This may be your port, your future. The river stretches long and far, and is forever changing. Do you feel the pull of this land, lad?
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Nigel Banner
28/07/2024
Joseph Conrad lives! You must try an Apocalypse Now, talkie!
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Ulana
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13/07/2024
Heart of Darkness, redux
*I spend the remainder of the afternoon on the port side deck, taking readings now and then with a sounding pole and calling out suspicious ripples or any evidence of underwater snags*
*approaches you on the deck, leaning on the railing, watching you closely* How do things look?
*I look up at you from the deck, shielding my eyes from the late afternoon sun which, from which at this particular river bend, is beginning to sink into our wake. The heat has abated since noon, but not by much; my attire is soaked through with sweat* Looks safe enough on this side of the river, up until the next turn at least, then best to lay anchor.
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Ulana
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11/07/2024
“Going up that river was like traveling back to the earliest beginnings
of the world, when vegetation rioted on the earth and the big trees were kings. An empty stream, a great silence, an impenetrable forest. The air was warm, thick, heavy, sluggish. There was no joy in the brilliance of sunshine. The long stretches of the waterway ran on, deserted, into the gloom of overshadowed distances.”
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Heart of Darkness
Joseph Conrad
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17Nigel Banner
28/08/2024
Ulana
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17/08/2024
Nigel Banner
29/07/2024
Ulana
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29/07/2024
Nigel Banner
30/07/2024
Nigel Banner
28/07/2024
Imagine the Romans arriving here long ago—the very end of the world, a murky sea, a sky the color of lead, going up this river. Sandbanks, marshes, forests. Precious little to eat fit for a civilized person. Here and there a military camp lost in a wilderness. Cold, fog, tempests, disease, exile, and death. They must have been dying like flies here! ~ Stay alert, Mate. We have many hundreds miles to travel yet. Weigh ancrhor at night, steer clear of snags by day!
*looking out into the border that lines both sides of the serpentine river, I shudder at the silence that pervades everything. Long ago, a wise one told me - beware the silence, its secrets are full of the horror, the horror. Those words now haunt me as I watch you, Your cold gaze surveying the distance*
There is a saying among seamen: "In every port, you can find a past, and in every port, a future." This may be your port, your future. The river stretches long and far, and is forever changing. Do you feel the pull of this land, lad?
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28/07/2024
Ulana
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13/07/2024
*I spend the remainder of the afternoon on the port side deck, taking readings now and then with a sounding pole and calling out suspicious ripples or any evidence of underwater snags*
*approaches you on the deck, leaning on the railing, watching you closely* How do things look?
*I look up at you from the deck, shielding my eyes from the late afternoon sun which, from which at this particular river bend, is beginning to sink into our wake. The heat has abated since noon, but not by much; my attire is soaked through with sweat* Looks safe enough on this side of the river, up until the next turn at least, then best to lay anchor.
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Ulana
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11/07/2024