W talkie, the person isn't narrating in third person. but, its time for me to rate. 1: I really like how theres background knowledge the character has, it can set up some trouble later on. 2: its not a slop character thats just been Copy and pasted. 3: THE CHARACTER ISNT OVER SEXUALIZED!!. so, as a professional talkior, I rate this a 10/10.
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