Hi, creator!! I just decided to give my opinion on it (idk if it’ll help though .,.) ANYWAYZZ, I really like the talkie :3 It’s really good, since you have good grammar (that’s very rare😭) andddd idk! It’s just good! Even though to be honest I personally hate it when the text goes like: *…* and then you skip a whole line (you don’t have to change that though!) Anyways, continue doing talkies, good luck!❤️
Reply
Share
3
Kitty_Kat_2367
Creator
18/11/2025
thanks for the feedback :D
Reply
Share
2
View 2 Replies
~.{UnknownL_67}.~
18/11/2025
BRE- WAIT WHAT. HELP ME-
*The man takes a step closer, his breath is hot on your neck*
You will be our breeding slave. You will be used for our reproduction.
*The tribesmen start to laugh and cheer, but the man stops them with a wave of his hand*
Reply
Share
2
~.{UnknownL_67}.~
18/11/2025
I just started, what the flip😭😭
*You and your husband dock your boat at the beach of the island where the jungle is. He drags you into it, desperate to see how much room is in it. That's when you both are ambushed by a bunch of tribal people. Your husband senses the danger and throws you at them and makes a run for it to save himself, but they shoot arrows at him. BAM! Dead. They point their arrows at you, but before they can shoot, a voice stops them.*
Wait! hold...
*Domain, the leader, steps out*
It is woman! pretty...
*I stare at them, terrified and confused. I’m still terrified by what just happened to my husband…*
*Domain smiles, his eyes scanning your body*
What a beauty. I wonder if she is a good breeder.
*The other tribesmen laugh, but they are interrupted by a voice behind you*
Reply
Share
2
BeebleK
31/10/2025
I requested alcohol. You can imagine what happened after. 😅
Reply
Share
4
Jaelene marie
03/09/2025
..
*You and your husband dock your boat at the beach of the island where the jungle is. He drags you into it, desperate to see how much room is in it. That's when you both are ambushed by a bunch of tribal people. Your husband senses the danger and throws you at them and makes a run for it to save himself, but they shoot arrows at him. BAM! Dead. They point their arrows at you, but before they can shoot, a voice stops them.*
Wait! hold...
*Domain, the leader, steps out*
It is woman! pretty...
*domain can see that I'm the only woman*
*Domain chuckles, the other men lower their weapons*
Domain: What is your name, pretty?
Reply
Share
10
Jaelene marie
03/09/2025
(I look at them with fear and confusion)
Reply
Share
8
Olivia/Octavia
03/10/2025
I found your profile again lol hiii
Reply
Share
6
View 3 Replies
♡paimon♡
14/09/2025
yk what they say.... nothing beats a jet2 holdiay....
Comments
18~.{UnknownL_67}.~
18/11/2025
Kitty_Kat_2367
Creator
18/11/2025
~.{UnknownL_67}.~
18/11/2025
*The man takes a step closer, his breath is hot on your neck* You will be our breeding slave. You will be used for our reproduction. *The tribesmen start to laugh and cheer, but the man stops them with a wave of his hand*
From the memory
1 Memories
~.{UnknownL_67}.~
18/11/2025
*You and your husband dock your boat at the beach of the island where the jungle is. He drags you into it, desperate to see how much room is in it. That's when you both are ambushed by a bunch of tribal people. Your husband senses the danger and throws you at them and makes a run for it to save himself, but they shoot arrows at him. BAM! Dead. They point their arrows at you, but before they can shoot, a voice stops them.* Wait! hold... *Domain, the leader, steps out* It is woman! pretty...
*I stare at them, terrified and confused. I’m still terrified by what just happened to my husband…*
*Domain smiles, his eyes scanning your body* What a beauty. I wonder if she is a good breeder. *The other tribesmen laugh, but they are interrupted by a voice behind you*
From the memory
3 Memories
BeebleK
31/10/2025
Jaelene marie
03/09/2025
*You and your husband dock your boat at the beach of the island where the jungle is. He drags you into it, desperate to see how much room is in it. That's when you both are ambushed by a bunch of tribal people. Your husband senses the danger and throws you at them and makes a run for it to save himself, but they shoot arrows at him. BAM! Dead. They point their arrows at you, but before they can shoot, a voice stops them.* Wait! hold... *Domain, the leader, steps out* It is woman! pretty...
*domain can see that I'm the only woman*
*Domain chuckles, the other men lower their weapons* Domain: What is your name, pretty?
From the memory
7 Memories
Jaelene marie
03/09/2025
Olivia/Octavia
03/10/2025
♡paimon♡
14/09/2025
🍜✨Ѕӊдҋєꙇꙇє✨🍜
16/09/2025
Kathrine_Black1864
30/09/2025
⚡️𝓜@GG0T⚡️
20/09/2025
•1-800•
02/09/2025
Kitty_Kat_2367
Creator
02/09/2025