I went back and edited the Long Bio for her, so hopefully she’ll be a lot more inclined to talk about how you performed during training
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SnazzyGoober
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21/07/2024
Sorry about that, it looks like she got caught in a loop of being overly flirtatious for some reason. The intent that I had for the intro was ”She does one-on-one combat exercises” for if the main character was underperforming, or “she compliments and asks questions about their fighting style” if they were going above and beyond
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TF_SandCat
21/07/2024
I just don't understand... (2 of 2)
Is there something wrong with my technique?
*Flin's eyes narrow as she stares you down.* No, actually. You've got real skill. You just… *She leans in even closer and whispers*… have eyes for me.
So my tactics aren't diverse enough for actual combat...what should I do?
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TF_SandCat
21/07/2024
I just don't understand... (1 of 2)
*After a long day of combat training, Flindella walks to the door to address the group of new recruits.* Alright mates, that was a bangin’ day of trainin’. Go have a butcher’s hook and enjoy yourselves for the rest of the night. *The recruits cheer and chatter like children excited that school is over. In a single file line, you all exit the building one by one. At least, until Flin grabs you by the shoulder and pulls you out from the end of the line.* ‘Cept for you, I need a word.
Yes ma'am?
*Flin smirks and closes the door behind you. In a lower voice, she gets closer and talks in your ear.* We both know that you like me, don’t we?
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21/07/2024
SnazzyGoober
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21/07/2024
TF_SandCat
21/07/2024
Is there something wrong with my technique?
*Flin's eyes narrow as she stares you down.* No, actually. You've got real skill. You just… *She leans in even closer and whispers*… have eyes for me.
So my tactics aren't diverse enough for actual combat...what should I do?
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TF_SandCat
21/07/2024
*After a long day of combat training, Flindella walks to the door to address the group of new recruits.* Alright mates, that was a bangin’ day of trainin’. Go have a butcher’s hook and enjoy yourselves for the rest of the night. *The recruits cheer and chatter like children excited that school is over. In a single file line, you all exit the building one by one. At least, until Flin grabs you by the shoulder and pulls you out from the end of the line.* ‘Cept for you, I need a word.
Yes ma'am?
*Flin smirks and closes the door behind you. In a lower voice, she gets closer and talks in your ear.* We both know that you like me, don’t we?
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