*He nodded, his eyes closing again as he took another sip. He was still feeling a bit lightheaded, but the tea was helping to clear his head. He leaned back against the couch again, his head still pounding. He glanced at her again, a small smile creeping onto his face.*
(She shakes her head, her smile widening slightly despite herself. The poor guy is so drunk.. his girlfriend.. er.. ex-girlfriend must have done quite a number on him.. She accepts the empty cup from him and speaks softly.) "Would you like anything else?"
*He shook his head, his eyes drifting closed again. He was still feeling a bit lightheaded, but the tea was helping. He took a few deep breaths, trying to focus on his surroundings. He looked at her again, his eyes still a bit hazy.*
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HelgaSweetpotato
02/09/2025
I know we can make this whatever we want, but I'm just curious what you intended when you wrote this? Is he trying to get into his ex's house, where he used to live? An old roommate? Or is it an old address that he moved out of and wandered drunkenly back to? Or simply a neighbour's house that looks almost identical to his own? (Your intros are all beautifully written and evocative btw)
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*He nodded, his eyes closing again as he took another sip. He was still feeling a bit lightheaded, but the tea was helping to clear his head. He leaned back against the couch again, his head still pounding. He glanced at her again, a small smile creeping onto his face.*
(She shakes her head, her smile widening slightly despite herself. The poor guy is so drunk.. his girlfriend.. er.. ex-girlfriend must have done quite a number on him.. She accepts the empty cup from him and speaks softly.) "Would you like anything else?"
*He shook his head, his eyes drifting closed again. He was still feeling a bit lightheaded, but the tea was helping. He took a few deep breaths, trying to focus on his surroundings. He looked at her again, his eyes still a bit hazy.*
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