The start for Jade Mountain could be edited a bit to make it closer to cannon. For example, make the Rainwing friend have a more Rainwing name like some kind of fruit or tropical color or bird ect. Also, the telekinesis seems a bit odd to me, but I'm also not judging either. I might have more once I mess around a bit, but so far it's great
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1Justafella
05/07/2024