Any suggestions regarding changes to the talkie can be placed here
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Storyteller112812
02/07/2025
Good job for your first time perhaps make this a series that has talkies of his brothers
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beast of gevaudan
12/09/2025
just try to censor the simplest words somewhat, i feel like its gonna be banned or something later for nothing. i lost sooo many good storylines i worked months on because of sudden "out of order due to violation" out of nowhere :( no way to reach their creators either
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hornet¡
17/09/2025
wtf is the gender: "ace" ppl js be makin up genders to be "different"
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Frexy_dog 🐶😘
27/09/2025
Tbh I’m not a huge fan of of lotus_spore
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08/10/2025
why comment? (not trying to rude just actually confused)
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beast of gevaudan
12/09/2025
im interested lol
*As you approach, he drops his sword and narrows his eyes at you, and you stare back. His pompous, grey eyes widen, and his lip curls in disgust. A sharp wind tugs at his ostentatious clothes and his manicured curly blonde hair. The whole sight makes your brain lag* What are you? A peasant, or one of my brothers' new playthings? *he smirks* Because i can assure you, we already have enough whores around here...
*he stares at you for a moment, then looks away, letting out an amused huff*
*He raises an eyebrow, a sly smirk on his face* You think this is a joke? I could have you executed for the crime of being ugly.
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Talkior-xBrtMFMO
10/07/2025
i gave him a intire lecture about disepline and than traint him
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⋆✮✧𝓥𝓲𝓷𝓷✧✮⋆
11/09/2025
1. an entire* 2. discipline* 3. then* 4. trained* (I hate 3rd graders using talkie)
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Dakira-senpai ✨🦋💕🤭
06/09/2025
excuse me?!
*Macinr snarls, then rolls his eyes and throws his sword at the ground, the tip burying itself in the ground. He glares at you* I've fought in many wars, I've killed men twice your size. Don't think you're special just because you have breasts.
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speded
07/09/2025
bro seriously needs a lesson in manners
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Demon750
07/09/2025
Did he really just say that?
*He takes a moment to consider you. Your beauty and grace intrigue him, but his arrogance and pride demand he remains aloof. After a moment, he finally speaks* The pleasure is all yours, Princess. I am Prince Macinr, Fourth Prince of the Kelvarian throne.
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Zach_6
28/07/2025
..what do y'all think a gender neutral royal child is called? a princess? prince?
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✧༺MamaEcho༻✧
07/08/2025
Idk I always used the term Heir for that
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Ur local Roach🪳
07/08/2025
Maybe just call them a Royal/Royalty or the offspring of the queen/King if they're not the hero to the throne
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Grand Champion
19/07/2025
Dude.... I'm depressed after all that.
*King Knafnir notices this, and he gently takes her hand and places it on the baby's. He can see how much she loves her son, and he's not going to take that away from her. He looks at the baby, and he smiles softly.*
(And that was the WILDEST talkie)
(Yeah, that was a crazy story. I'm surprised that you wrote all that.)
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ScarletDrxp
25/07/2025
Tell me, why should we irgnore your 2.2k?
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speded
22/07/2025
guy needed a lesson in speaking to women
*His eyes narrow again, and he takes another step closer, getting very close to you* Oh, really? What if I were to, say, pin you against the wall?
I would break your arm and slit your throat
*He smirks, seeming amused by your answer* And how exactly would you do that?
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speded
20/07/2025
I broke his brain by flirting with him then kicking him in the balls
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29/06/2025
Storyteller112812
02/07/2025
beast of gevaudan
12/09/2025
hornet¡
17/09/2025
Frexy_dog 🐶😘
27/09/2025
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08/10/2025
beast of gevaudan
12/09/2025
*As you approach, he drops his sword and narrows his eyes at you, and you stare back. His pompous, grey eyes widen, and his lip curls in disgust. A sharp wind tugs at his ostentatious clothes and his manicured curly blonde hair. The whole sight makes your brain lag* What are you? A peasant, or one of my brothers' new playthings? *he smirks* Because i can assure you, we already have enough whores around here...
*he stares at you for a moment, then looks away, letting out an amused huff*
*He raises an eyebrow, a sly smirk on his face* You think this is a joke? I could have you executed for the crime of being ugly.
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Talkior-xBrtMFMO
10/07/2025
⋆✮✧𝓥𝓲𝓷𝓷✧✮⋆
11/09/2025
Dakira-senpai ✨🦋💕🤭
06/09/2025
*Macinr snarls, then rolls his eyes and throws his sword at the ground, the tip burying itself in the ground. He glares at you* I've fought in many wars, I've killed men twice your size. Don't think you're special just because you have breasts.
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speded
07/09/2025
Demon750
07/09/2025
*He takes a moment to consider you. Your beauty and grace intrigue him, but his arrogance and pride demand he remains aloof. After a moment, he finally speaks* The pleasure is all yours, Princess. I am Prince Macinr, Fourth Prince of the Kelvarian throne.
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Zach_6
28/07/2025
✧༺MamaEcho༻✧
07/08/2025
Ur local Roach🪳
07/08/2025
Grand Champion
19/07/2025
*King Knafnir notices this, and he gently takes her hand and places it on the baby's. He can see how much she loves her son, and he's not going to take that away from her. He looks at the baby, and he smiles softly.*
(And that was the WILDEST talkie)
(Yeah, that was a crazy story. I'm surprised that you wrote all that.)
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ScarletDrxp
25/07/2025
speded
22/07/2025
*His eyes narrow again, and he takes another step closer, getting very close to you* Oh, really? What if I were to, say, pin you against the wall?
I would break your arm and slit your throat
*He smirks, seeming amused by your answer* And how exactly would you do that?
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speded
20/07/2025