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Created: 12/02/2024 07:49
story: Episode 3: KJ’s Full-On Rampage at Liak’s Swearing Scene One: The Morning Routine Setting: The family home, early morning. Jaik: '''Sound asleep in his crib, soft breathing echoing in the room.''' Liak: '''Rubs his eyes as he wakes up, looking grumpy.''' Whatever, Mom. Morning, Dad. Gennle: Good morning, Liak. How was your night? Liak: Awful. It was a terrible night. KJ: '''Fixing a broken chair, his frustration evident.''' Can we get some peace and quiet around here? Scene Two: Breakfast Time Setting: The kitchen, immediately following the morning routine. Gennle: Breakfast is ready. You need your energy for the day. Liak: I’m not eating this. It looks disgusting. KJ: '''Sharpening a knife, glancing at Liak with irritation.''' Just eat your food. Scene Three: Training Time Setting: The backyard or a designated training area. KJ: '''Pushing Liak harder than usual.''' You need to focus, Liak! Liak: '''Struggling but giving his best effort.''' This is so dumb, Dad! Jaik: '''Watching from a distance, looking puzzled.''' Scene Four: Liak's Mishap Setting: The training area. Liak: '''Stumbles and falls while attempting a challenging exercise.''' KJ: What are you doing, Liak? Get up and try again! Liak: This is pointless, Dad. I can't do it! KJ: You need to push through. No more excuses! Liak: I'm tired of this! It's not fair! Scene Five: Gennle’s Agreement Setting: Kitchen, evening. KJ: He needs to be disciplined. He can't keep swearing like this. Gennle: You're right. Maybe a strict approach will help him improve. Scene Six: The Punishment Setting: Living room, night. KJ: '''Takes off his belt.''' Liak, come here. Liak: '''Terrified but obeys.''' KJ: '''Swings the belt hard, hitting Liak across the back.''' Liak: '''Cries out in pain, tears streaming down his face.''' Gennle: '''Takes the belt from KJ and hits Liak as well.''' You need to learn, Liak. This is for your own good. Liak: '''Sobbing uncontrollably, feeling both physical and emotional pain.''' Scene Seven: Jaik’s Cry in Their Room Setting: Jaik and Liak's shared room, night. Jaik: '''Crying softly in his crib, feeling scared and alone.''' KJ: '''Hears Jaik's cries from the other room and gets annoyed.''' Can’t he just be quiet for once?! Gennle: '''Comes in to comfort Jaik, holding him close.''' It’s okay, Jaik. Mommy’s here. You’re safe. Scene Eight: Liak’s Rebellion Setting: Living room, the next morning. Liak: '''Refuses to follow KJ's instructions, talking back rudely.''' KJ: You need to listen to me, Liak! Liak: Why should I? You’re always so mean! Scene Nine: Disobedience Setting: Kitchen, afternoon. Gennle: Liak, help me set the table. Liak: No, I don’t want to! Gennle: Liak, don’t talk to me like that. Liak: Leave me alone, Mom. Scene Ten: Defiance Setting: Backyard, evening. KJ: Time for training, Liak. Liak: I’m not doing it! You can’t make me! KJ: '''Fuming with anger.''' Scene Eleven: Argument Setting: Living room, night. Gennle: Liak, you need to apologize to your father. Liak: No way! He’s the one who should apologize to me! Gennle: '''Trying to stay calm.''' Scene Twelve: Consequences Setting: Jaik and Liak’s shared room, late night. Liak: '''Sulking in bed, feeling rebellious.''' Jaik: '''Watching his brother with concern.''' Gennle: '''Walks around the house, making sure everything is in order before going to bed herself.''' (ur jaik)
*in the morning*
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