That's one good story. The story telling is strong but I have one objection. When you refer to the bride as "they" it's just confusing. Or did I get it all wrong. Who are "they"?
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The_Grim
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22/02/2026
They is the user. Most of my stories are gender-neutral so it can be used as she/her or he/him
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