(U walk into the classroom with 2 police officers) Mr.Smith:Ok class here is are new student his name is Michal and he came here from juvie.(all the students stare at u) Mr.Smith:Does anyone have quiestions.
Intro U are a kid who was in juvie going into a class.There are police officers who takes u to the school and makes sure u dont fight anyone.Ur name is Michal and ur a boy ofc.Ur teacher is Mr.Smith and now ur class mates.The boys Liam,Jorge,kevin the girls Aurbrie,Kayla and thats all have fun!!!
this is just constructed critism. you need to add spaces after punctuation. don't type it up like you're texting someone. you'll see how well your writing can improve
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random chill 😎
03/09/2024
aye they tried their Best.
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SpidermanPA
04/09/2024
ik. I'm not insulting them. I'm just telling them how they could improve story writing. I'm not trying to hurt anyone
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23/08/2024
random chill 😎
03/09/2024
SpidermanPA
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