what year does it take place I put I'm a guy and I drive up with my car I don't know if it is 1800 with just horses
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Talkior-AjpQRXSR
30/09/2025
Damn that’s the most effort I have seen in a talkie. Detail? Yep! Awesome intricate story? Yep! Keeps the reader interested? Yep! Talkie actually good? Yep! But barely 600 connectors? Doesn’t add up…
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D. Leingod
28/09/2025
pt2 character introduction
"So how'd it show up here? So far away?" *He places the broken broach into her hands as he scratches his chin* "Groom lost, found broken jewelry that belonged to grooms bride...Hmm" *He snaps his fingers* "He robbed you"
*Her eyes widen, her face darkening with rage.* "Robbed me? He stole from me? That... that monster! He promised to marry me, and then he betrayed me! I'll find him and make him pay for his crimes!"
"Indeed" *He grins* "It seems fate has brought us together in a sense? Me being a otherworldly detective? I too always seek justice"
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D. Leingod
28/09/2025
pt1
*She steps through the fog, black rose bouquet in hand, eyes searching the silent village.*
(softly) “Where are you, my groom…? Don’t be shy. I prepared everything for our vows.”
*She stops. No one answers. Her smile fades. Turning, she glides back to her crimson carriage.*
“…Take me to the Southern Regions!! Perhaps he’s waiting there… in denial.”
*The carriage pulls up to a small, seemingly ordinary house, the red eyes of the horses gleaming in the dark as he clicks in the magazine of his heavy silver handgun, he slides the rack to slide fresh brass into the chamber*
*The carriage stops. She steps out, eyes scanning the area for any sign of her groom, her grip tightening on the bouquet of black roses. She walks toward the house, a cold fury building inside her.*
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Kamada hashirame
14/07/2025
my girlfriend Shiranui Akane is beautiful she loves to killed and so am i
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EnigmaticEncounter
07/07/2025
i love the plot, the skills and the quote i may contain this in a game
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EnigmaticEncounter
07/09/2025
wooo, i dont know if i should change the name but skills are done
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7goku 🐉🐉🐉🐉🐉
06/10/2025
Talkior-AjpQRXSR
30/09/2025
D. Leingod
28/09/2025
"So how'd it show up here? So far away?" *He places the broken broach into her hands as he scratches his chin* "Groom lost, found broken jewelry that belonged to grooms bride...Hmm" *He snaps his fingers* "He robbed you"
*Her eyes widen, her face darkening with rage.* "Robbed me? He stole from me? That... that monster! He promised to marry me, and then he betrayed me! I'll find him and make him pay for his crimes!"
"Indeed" *He grins* "It seems fate has brought us together in a sense? Me being a otherworldly detective? I too always seek justice"
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D. Leingod
28/09/2025
*She steps through the fog, black rose bouquet in hand, eyes searching the silent village.* (softly) “Where are you, my groom…? Don’t be shy. I prepared everything for our vows.” *She stops. No one answers. Her smile fades. Turning, she glides back to her crimson carriage.* “…Take me to the Southern Regions!! Perhaps he’s waiting there… in denial.”
*The carriage pulls up to a small, seemingly ordinary house, the red eyes of the horses gleaming in the dark as he clicks in the magazine of his heavy silver handgun, he slides the rack to slide fresh brass into the chamber*
*The carriage stops. She steps out, eyes scanning the area for any sign of her groom, her grip tightening on the bouquet of black roses. She walks toward the house, a cold fury building inside her.*
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Kamada hashirame
14/07/2025
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