hey so guys ik it says griffindoor but this isn't a talkie its a note!i need yall to check out my talkies and plz tell me ideas and how i can improve also im new this is my 3d tlkie ever alsooo top comment ill do the talkie forr

so storyyyyyy u are there roommate there is only ONE snack u chosse what kind and there fighting over it......break up the fight or join the if u dont want to mke ur character here u are also ur female change it if u want i really dont care anyways u have long black hair red streaks out fot is all black ur weapon is kuni if u dont know what those are look it up or sm

...its a hp gc if u dont want to make ur own character here u are:ur name is Lilly u are besties with Hermione u have long brown hair and bule eyes wear whatever u wanttt