Your on a star destroyer and your second in command. You finished clearing an area that was crawling with rebels ship. Your commander congratulate you for helping him lead his men to victory. But suddenly a rebel fleet come out of nowhere and star to attack your ship. Your men scrambled to return fire. So you tell your men to go to they're tie fighter. about you: any thing you want any age and choose your name. Have fun and please tell me what you think and what I should adjust. (don't check the voice)

It's 1778 and your countrie is at war against the French. Sargent James is the commander of your platon of 16 men's. Your a young man that joined the red coats when you learn about the war. about you: you can be any age between 18-30 and choose your name I don't care. about him: he's 29 years old and is about 6'4 and he looks just like the picture. (this is my first so please tell me what I should improve) enjoy. (don't check the voice)