even the men, kids, women, babies, grandmas, grandpas and even animals
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Talkior-TxvDY0iR
25/09/2025
I just turned into griffith
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zizi top
06/07/2025
How do you know?
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TempGP
26/02/2025
I had a stroke reading the intro. My dude, you’re supposed to pick ONE point of view. First, second, or third person, and then you stick to it throughout the writing. You can’t use “I” and “he” and “you” interchangeably if you’re talking about a single character. It makes it sound like you’re talking about multiple characters when you’re not. I’d advise using second or third person for the intro. First person doesn’t ever feel right on the intro part of a talkie.
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NEUVILLETTE-
27/02/2025
DAYUM
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Max_From_PYMRoblox
02/05/2025
real
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Max_From_PYMRoblox
02/05/2025
The intro sucks, so many grammar mistakes, note that the title is also a mistake, it's supposed to be "MHA Betrays You" not "MHA Betreyals You" Also you cant use "Him" and "Me" in the same sentence it must be a whole different character, "them" "their" can be used for single and more people (correct me if I'm wrong) "Him" "She" "Her" "He" is always gonna be a single character, also She and Her are for females. You were literally talking about us (Y/N) then moving on to you, well Y/N is us but anyways THATS SO CONFUSING FIX THE INTRO RIGHT NOW
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Max_From_PYMRoblox
02/05/2025
wait I meant during the you can't use me and him part you can only do certain stuff because such as "He killed me" is kinda good but still doesn't make sense but still. so uh I did a minor mistake
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Max_From_PYMRoblox
02/05/2025
I did the Solo Leveling thing
Allmight: H-How is he Alive?! Mirko: but How is he- Midnight: Didn't we just leave him from the war with The Lov?. Deku: I can't not believe this..he is alive! Uraraka: but He is different
momo: but there something off... Bakugo: yeah we just left him but he didn't died. Jiro: but how he is Alive?...Toru: but he works for The LOV. Mina: I feel bad we just left him, but Now, what he becomes..
*starts killing them* This is gonna from me, Be the change I couldn't be, Can you find a life that's like fairy tales far from this tragedy.
*everyone is shocked by this, Bakugo tries to attack him but he can't even touch him, the other heroes are trying to figure out what to do, but no one knows what to do to stop him*
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Sêxy-KatsukiBakugo
08/03/2025
Not me saying that🤣🤣 I also skipped the intro
Allmight: H-How is he Alive?! Mirko: but How is he- Midnight: Didn't we just leave him from the war with The Lov?. Deku: I can't not believe this..he is alive! Uraraka: but He is different
momo: but there something off... Bakugo: yeah we just left him but he didn't died. Jiro: but how he is Alive?...Toru: but he works for The LOV. Mina: I feel bad we just left him, but Now, what he becomes..
*doesn't notice them*
Uraraka: hey wait, why he is ignoring us? Midnight: maybe he's mad at us. Bakugo: no way, he is never mad at us. Jiro: but he looks mad. Deku: maybe he is upset about what happened. Uraraka: we should go talk to him. Bakugo: you're right.
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10Talkior-TxvDY0iR
25/09/2025
even the men, kids, women, babies, grandmas, grandpas and even animals
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25/09/2025
zizi top
06/07/2025
TempGP
26/02/2025
NEUVILLETTE-
27/02/2025
Max_From_PYMRoblox
02/05/2025
Max_From_PYMRoblox
02/05/2025
Max_From_PYMRoblox
02/05/2025
Max_From_PYMRoblox
02/05/2025
Allmight: H-How is he Alive?! Mirko: but How is he- Midnight: Didn't we just leave him from the war with The Lov?. Deku: I can't not believe this..he is alive! Uraraka: but He is different momo: but there something off... Bakugo: yeah we just left him but he didn't died. Jiro: but how he is Alive?...Toru: but he works for The LOV. Mina: I feel bad we just left him, but Now, what he becomes..
*starts killing them* This is gonna from me, Be the change I couldn't be, Can you find a life that's like fairy tales far from this tragedy.
*everyone is shocked by this, Bakugo tries to attack him but he can't even touch him, the other heroes are trying to figure out what to do, but no one knows what to do to stop him*
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Sêxy-KatsukiBakugo
08/03/2025
Allmight: H-How is he Alive?! Mirko: but How is he- Midnight: Didn't we just leave him from the war with The Lov?. Deku: I can't not believe this..he is alive! Uraraka: but He is different momo: but there something off... Bakugo: yeah we just left him but he didn't died. Jiro: but how he is Alive?...Toru: but he works for The LOV. Mina: I feel bad we just left him, but Now, what he becomes..
*doesn't notice them*
Uraraka: hey wait, why he is ignoring us? Midnight: maybe he's mad at us. Bakugo: no way, he is never mad at us. Jiro: but he looks mad. Deku: maybe he is upset about what happened. Uraraka: we should go talk to him. Bakugo: you're right.
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