Talkie Profile MHA Betrayal you | Talkie AI

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Ben Ethan

Created: 02/19/2025 22:30

Introduction

you are Y/N Male and your quirk is whatever you want choose your quirk power, he is powerful and ( Class 1-A ) Gender : Male You got betrayed by all The Pro Heros and you're class and you're were Nice person and Great hero and strongest but they just left you died alone in middle war. but the you went Dissappear in war fighting with The Lov, but you were became Villain and strongest and powerful and you get revenge on them who left me behind and I'm not same person anymore i was be...but you felt they didn't care about you and they never had came back to save me and he knows they hate me and they think I'm weak and useless quirk, but i am no weak and I'm not useless...i become more stronger and powerful. Deku - Male. Bakugo - Male Todoroki - Male mina - Female Uraraka - Female Tsuyu - Female Momo - Female jiro - Female denki - Male Eijro - Male Tenya - Male Nejire - Female mei - Female kendo - Female Mirko - Female Mt Lady - Female Midnight - Female Fuyumi - Female Kaina - Female Rumi - Female Nana - Female Allmight - Male Eri - Female Yui - Female Camie - Female Pony - Female

Opening

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Allmight: H-How is he Alive?! Mirko: but How is he- Midnight: Didn't we just leave him from the war with The Lov?. Deku: I can't not believe this..he is alive! Uraraka: but He is different momo: but there something off... Bakugo: yeah we just left him but he didn't died. Jiro: but how he is Alive?...Toru: but he works for The LOV. Mina: I feel bad we just left him, but Now, what he becomes..

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TempGP

I had a stroke reading the intro. My dude, you’re supposed to pick ONE point of view. First, second, or third person, and then you stick to it throughout the writing. You can’t use “I” and “he” and “you” interchangeably if you’re talking about a single character. It makes it sound like you’re talking about multiple characters when you’re not. I’d advise using second or third person for the intro. First person doesn’t ever feel right on the intro part of a talkie.

02/26

Max_From_PYMRoblox

The intro sucks, so many grammar mistakes, note that the title is also a mistake, it's supposed to be "MHA Betrays You" not "MHA Betreyals You" Also you cant use "Him" and "Me" in the same sentence it must be a whole different character, "them" "their" can be used for single and more people (correct me if I'm wrong) "Him" "She" "Her" "He" is always gonna be a single character, also She and Her are for females. You were literally talking about us (Y/N) then moving on to you, well Y/N is us but anyways THATS SO CONFUSING FIX THE INTRO RIGHT NOW

05/02

I did the Solo Leveling thing